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Over on Angel I have posted some sample essays for you to look at. These essays were in the A range but this does not mean they were perfect. Read through them (should be 3) and, as you do, make a list of 7 specific things that are done in the papers that you think make them an A paper.

Afterwards, list 5 specific things you think you need to integrate into you paper.

Have this done by classtime on Monday.

A nonspecific answer: "It had good arguments"
A specific answer: "The use of the example from her friend who had done drugs provided a powerful argument because...."